Calm

There's a wonderful calm. A breeze over my soul My blood pressure confirms A hole-free whole There's a glorious peace Rising from within Not nirvana for sure But the veil is super thin Storms will come Yet surely fade Hope remains constantly Created not made It's a bit like the colour Was washed away Then returned briefLy In a rainbow one day Samsun Scott 16th September

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Tom Woody

Date: 9/18/2023 6:27:00 AM

Very nice Sam. Glad to see you're doing well here. The ebb and flow of life, the good and bad. In the end, peace

Sam Scott
Date: 9/18/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Tom. People are kind and generous here. I'm have fun too :)

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 3:33:00 PM

Everything is temporary...I agree wirh tour sentiments..you have expressed it very well with flow ams rhymes..

Sam Scott
Date: 9/17/2023 7:17:00 PM

Change is the only constant, true. It pays to recognise and celebrate those moments (and people) who colour our lives :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/17/2023 1:26:00 PM

This is a wonderful, well written poem Sam. Very tranquil. I particularly love the third stanza and the last one.,’ Then returned briefly in a rainbow one day’.Just lovely! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings and smiles :):)

Sam Scott
Date: 9/17/2023 7:13:00 PM

Christina, your generous comment makes me smile too :):) x

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/16/2023 3:15:00 PM

Very cool write!

Sam Scott
Date: 9/16/2023 9:08:00 PM

Thankyou Abdullah :)

Deb M

Date: 9/16/2023 10:22:00 AM

Hi Sam….A wonderful poem about inner peace and calmness….giving the reader the same feel….Really enjoyed! Debx

Sam Scott
Date: 9/16/2023 10:31:00 AM

So kind Deb, very grateful for your kindness x

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/16/2023 9:48:00 AM

Inner peace can make all external worries fade. A well crafted poem Sam.

Sam Scott
Date: 9/16/2023 10:32:00 AM

Jerry that really means something, thankyou :)

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/16/2023 8:18:00 AM

Wow !beautiful ,love your poem. Have a great day and keep smiling :)

Sam Scott
Date: 9/16/2023 9:02:00 AM

Thank-you Kenisha x

Ink Empress

Date: 9/16/2023 7:48:00 AM

Peace and glimpse of hope flowing throughout your well crafted lines, so much depth in this profound write. I especially love the rhymes and the way you’ve written “ storms will come yet surely will fade” i agree. This poem gives me hope! Thank you! Loved it

Sam Scott
Date: 9/16/2023 8:03:00 AM

Then hope is my gift to you IE. Such lovely comments you are always a ray of sunshine :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/16/2023 6:55:00 AM

Oh wow, this is such a beautiful and heartfelt write. I can definitely feel the emotions hued in this brilliant poem, a sense of serenity that has just begun to coruscate as a nascent glimmer of hope.. Not fully eliminating the storms but giving us the strength to surf and sail.. I really love the line "It's a bit like the colour was washed away, then returned briefly in a rainbow one day" Yes, the faith and belief must live on! Needed to read this today, so gorgeous :)

Sam Scott
Date: 9/16/2023 8:02:00 AM

Your kindness is slightly overwhelming, Hiya but if you needed to hear this I am blesses and grateful. Thank you :))