Kim Rodrigues Poet Than-Bauk

Calls After Dark

Nine o’clock dark
Stage for shark swim
Deep arc stakeout

Sailors phishing
Not squaring news
Sparing no one

Once debutante 
Vessel vaunt sinks
For daunt of men

Dawns a new day
Silent gray-blue
Sea fray absconds

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Afzal Nusker January 18, 2017 at 11:32 PM Nice to know about this amazing form and the poem is interesting as well.

Chris Green January 17, 2017 at 6:08 AM I had not read this form before and you did a fantastic job with it. The rhymes come in abstract snippets per line, which were fun to read and feel. Nice theme too Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2017 at 7:31 AM Thank you, Chris!

Maurice Yvonne January 17, 2017 at 5:32 AM A difficult form. Excellent version. Thanks, Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2017 at 7:31 AM Thank you, Maurice!

Joanna Daniel January 16, 2017 at 11:45 PM This is a beauty, Kim:) the form is very tough, you've used it so well:) a 7:) Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2017 at 7:32 AM Thank you, Jo!

White Wolf January 16, 2017 at 10:12 PM An excellent poem, Kim! White Wolf January 16, 2017 at 11:32 PM I know what you meant and that's the main thing. I'm unschooled so I know how difficult the language is. Haha Kim Rodrigues January 16, 2017 at 10:19 PM Tried...lol...tired :0 Kim Rodrigues January 16, 2017 at 10:18 PM Thank you, WW! Tryed out a new form.