Callous

“Corrosion of feelings”, the accusation said. A seal, a signature. I was a bit confused, though, when the judge, a heavyset gentleman with a kind red face, rose from his seat and cuddled me. 
- What's your last wish, son? - he asked me sweetly.
No wishes.
- Come on, - he insisted. - Ask the audience, fifty-fifty or call a friend?
The subconscious thirst for feeling things the way normal humans do tries to turn even nothingness into something resembling human, to give weight to weightlessness, to attach sense to nonsense, so it was not surprising that they caught me by surprise when I saw the prosecutor's face contort: he was crying. I can imagine how the executioner will be upset to align me a little – a local euphemism. Poor butcher!

you are so callous - 
he'll tell me slightly later 
feeling my thin neck

31.08.2019
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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 1:48 PM
You are so talented at giving us the unexpected Kurt. I loved this and the way you finished it. I am sure this impressive entry will be recognized and awarded! : ) xxoo
Ravidas Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Thank you very much, Connie. I hope you will also take part in this funny competition)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 7:40 AM
This has an interesting feel! So well done! A fave, Kurt!
Ravidas Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Oh,thank you, Kim)
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Not an easy read (to me), the flippancy is profound and grabbed me, then came an off the wall philosophical spill to further hold me enthralled inside your emotionally rolling profoundly bouncing ball. I had a good time, I enjoy dizzy! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Ravidas Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Rewrote that story.
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