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Called To Wander

Above the craggy cliffs along the shore a small white cross stands wearily alone a solemn mark, a requiem of yore where perils struck a young lass far from home. A bonnie beauty, angel rose of spring a wild and ancient tune stirred deep desires she had a gypsy heart for wandering she left to satisfy adventure's fires. From port to port she followed Northern star her face was set, a bowsprit figurehead determined as she travelled long and far she settled on an island where fate led. The day she fell the winds whipped wild and free her daring spirit brought her to the sea. Written on 9/1/2016

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Date: 2/18/2018 3:42:00 PM
Fabulously crafted poem. Lovely imagery. Congrats on your most deserving win, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Line! I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 2/17/2018 10:57:00 AM
A well done sonnet Laura, congratulations...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/18/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie! All the best to you :)
Date: 2/14/2018 7:49:00 PM
Hi Laura, back to congratulate you on another podium win for your lovely Sonnet. It was wonderful to read again! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/12/2016 8:20:00 AM
Very nicely done Laura. Carries the ebb and flow, the rise and fall, of the the sea with its beauties and dangers. Congrats on your placement
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/12/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind comments on my poem, John! I'm teally glad you liked it :)
Date: 9/11/2016 7:32:00 PM
A beautiful Sonnet, Laura, so perfect in meter, rhyme, emotion and imagery, and so deserving of a First Place win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/11/2016 10:07:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! I'm so glad you liked this :)
Date: 9/10/2016 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, a poem filled with sadness
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/10/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic. I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 9/10/2016 6:54:00 PM
wonderful flow Laura!congrats on your top placement :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/10/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Laura Loo!
Date: 9/10/2016 6:43:00 PM
Laura,congratulations on your 1st place win beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/10/2016 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Eve! I am thrilled! It's been a long while since I received a top spot, said this is very encouraging to me :)
Date: 9/2/2016 11:04:00 AM
Superbly done Laura...sadly we see these cross's much too often...god bless...^WW^
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/2/2016 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, WW. A small memorial cross I saw as I was hiking along the shoreline prompted me to write this...
Date: 9/1/2016 8:24:00 PM
Wow Laura, I loved this so much I read it twice. Really a sad but enchanting entry that should soar! 7 ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/1/2016 10:09:00 PM
Well, thank you sweet Connie! Your words are very encouraging to me :)
Date: 9/1/2016 7:42:00 PM
Laura, I love this sonnet. This is a beauty! Should do extremely well. It would if I were judging!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/1/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Daniel! So glad you liked it :)

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