Call of the Void

All that is comparable is not pointless,
comparability, by all account is what makes me feel special.
Does the figure of your anger make you shiver?

I cannot help but stop and look over the unforgiving void.
Are you upset by how overpowering it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the void so 

irresistible?

Once absent, who will really come looking for me?
Would it really be too bad if you disappeared?
Does it upset you to think about your absence?
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Agustin Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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