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Call Me a Super Hero

Terry said I was a real “sketch” I'm taking that as a compliment Not some colourful cartoon character Wonder what it represents Hope I'm more like Superman Than that scatter brain Daffy Duck Old Dick Tracy kinda makes sense Or Sylvester running amok Can't be Blondie but maybe Dagwood Maybe Terry of Pirates fame Perhaps one of the Katzenjammer Kids Or The Torch to set hearts aflame Always thought I was more like Batman With that fairy like Robin by his side Wasn't cut out for super hero-ness Seeing trouble I run away and hide I'm being silly really sorry about that I'm unique and a one of a kind If you still want to call me a Super Hero Just call me the Hulk, that's fine! © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 3/3/2015 11:05:00 PM
Great verse, Jack. Looking at your profile and your comments, I'd have said that your more of a Yosemite Sam (but with a much jollier disposition). Suffering succotash! (which i didn't realise comes from the Narragansett 'sohquttahhash', which are broken corn kernels. I've learnt something new just by researching my comment on your verse. You're a star! Regards, Mister Viv #7
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2015 5:29:00 AM
Didn't realize this would demand such intense scrutiny and research! LOL A "star"... WOW! Much appreciated... Yosemite Sam!
Date: 3/3/2015 8:58:00 PM
G'day Jack... Nah... I'll call you a 'souperhero' who writes entertaining poetry to have us feeling just that little bit better than before we read a poem of yours. Regards - Lindsay
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/3/2015 9:02:00 PM
Now that is SWEET my dear Aussie lady!!! You can drop by any time... don't need no invitation!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx
Date: 3/3/2015 11:47:00 AM
Need a Super Hero... Just call 1-800- 555- Dragon! He says he has the coolest cape and wants to show it around! He's definitely one of a kind. His motto is 'Never fear... Dragon's here! He also says if he could be any cartoon character... He'd be Mighty Mouse! Yeah Right! THat would be a PRETTY BIG Mouse... Don't you think? Oh, and cat's beware!...LOL
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:12:00 PM
I'm just a Super Hero of the Soup... Dragon's the Super Hero of the Universe! xxx
Date: 3/3/2015 11:17:00 AM
This made me chuckle Jack - you are the superhero of soup smiles - how about that:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:09:00 PM
And you are the superhero-ette! LOL How about that! Hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 3/3/2015 6:27:00 AM
I love it , Jack! Your sense of humor-ness is truly unique :() Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:47:00 AM
YUM YUM YUM!!! Love those hugs dear Kimberly! Sending 'em right back atcha... Jack xx

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