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Caliginous Caves

With their haunting beauty and calamitous construct
The captivating caves opprobriously obstruct
Ambient anguish heinously hidden
Humbling hearts trapped and love forbidden

Hemispherical hindering in the caves of ice
Where the solace of sorrows silently suffice
Terminal tentacles of the tyrannical snow queen
Quenching her thirst in the salivating smoke screen

Efficacious echoes of loves demise
Suffocating screams surveil and agonise
Benevolent breaths frantically forever frost
Within the caves of the lachrymal lost

As the winter wanders and whimsically waves
For my soul surrenders to the Caliginous Caves.


Aug.04.2016
Caves - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/5/2016 3:03:00 PM

Awesome alliteration in your super sonnet ^WW^:-)good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/5/2016 3:09:00 PM

Thank you Super Awesome Jan lol...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/5/2016 12:58:00 PM

Hi WW, You have penned a beautiful and well written sonnet. The imagery is lovely. I wish you the best in the contest . A Big seven:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/5/2016 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Alexis my friend...for your visit and beautiful comment...god bless...WW

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/5/2016 10:15:00 AM

This should do well, I also love the picture you chose. This form worked well with the theme.

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/5/2016 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Richard...watch out for those caves...they'll steal your breath away lol...god bless...WW

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/4/2016 2:37:00 PM

Super alliteration Wing Man. I've never been in an ice cave but I can only imagine the beauty. It would be like a glass cavern. Good luck in contest my friend!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/4/2016 8:39:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, Daniel...your visit is always welcome...even if you don't have a comment lol...god bless...^WW^

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/4/2016 10:28:00 AM

Alliteration, accepted and approved.

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/4/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you teach lol...great to have you visit Ronald...god bless...^WW^