Caliginous Caves

With their haunting beauty and calamitous construct
The captivating caves opprobriously obstruct
Ambient anguish heinously hidden
Humbling hearts trapped and love forbidden

Hemispherical hindering in the caves of ice
Where the solace of sorrows silently suffice
Terminal tentacles of the tyrannical snow queen
Quenching her thirst in the salivating smoke screen

Efficacious echoes of loves demise
Suffocating screams surveil and agonise
Benevolent breaths frantically forever frost
Within the caves of the lachrymal lost

As the winter wanders and whimsically waves
For my soul surrenders to the Caliginous Caves.


Aug.04.2016
Caves - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Awesome alliteration in your super sonnet ^WW^:-)good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Warrior Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Thank you Super Awesome Jan lol...god bless...^WW^
Y. Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Hi WW, You have penned a beautiful and well written sonnet. The imagery is lovely. I wish you the best in the contest . A Big seven:-) Alexis
Warrior Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Alexis my friend...for your visit and beautiful comment...god bless...WW
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 10:15 AM
This should do well, I also love the picture you chose. This form worked well with the theme.
Warrior Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Thank you Richard...watch out for those caves...they'll steal your breath away lol...god bless...WW
Turner Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Super alliteration Wing Man. I've never been in an ice cave but I can only imagine the beauty. It would be like a glass cavern. Good luck in contest my friend!
Warrior Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Thank you, my friend, Daniel...your visit is always welcome...even if you don't have a comment lol...god bless...^WW^
Kent Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Alliteration, accepted and approved.
Warrior Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Thank you teach lol...great to have you visit Ronald...god bless...^WW^
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