California Winter Stars

Aquamarine, winks. Observing them, they do blink. A possum, just thinks. 12/29/2021 RHYMED HAIKU

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Elena Eagle

Date: 1/2/2022 8:09:00 AM

This was so cute and fun!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/31/2021 5:32:00 AM

Succinct and sassy!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/29/2021 9:24:00 PM

I'm from California, and this does feel like those mild winter nights (and it may indeed by a winking possum) made me smile~

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/30/2021 4:09:00 AM

Michelle, it made me smile also! State is emptying out. We lost 429,000 people this last year. No longer a free state with crime on the rise,More are leaving this year.,,Pangie. It was once a great state,,,,HNY....tY foryour visit,

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/29/2021 6:34:00 PM

Love the non-sequitur there, Pangie.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/30/2021 4:01:00 AM

Lol...thanks..i never once thoughtt of it, Panagiota

Eve Roper

Date: 12/29/2021 2:41:00 PM

Cute haiku, a possum just reminds me of a mouse... don't care for them.. My neighbor had one in a cage they had caught last week it did look cute. They took it away to a field and dropped it off.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/29/2021 2:54:00 PM

My daughter saw one last night. I think mycat is bigger. I saw a grown one years ago. It was anything but small. The nurse is coming by to checkon me...... Thanks for comment Eve. pangie xo