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In a thriving city a boy was born, growing up melancholy and forlorn, thoughtful, with a poet's sensitive soul, he knew he was different and unwhole. His life would be both rose and piercing thorn. He took to the road, and he travelled far. In the Summer of Love, he found his star, and for the first time, he felt happiness. a strange new world felt like a warm caress, San Francisco and electric guitar. His smile, like the sun, would light up the sky, but that California Sunshine high would almost break him and lay him down low. But those days are gone, and so long ago. Now, we can only cry, and wonder - "why?"

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