California Dream

Cruising southwards to LA from Sac
a midnight filled with songs ‘n Luna, 
light-etching hills in a black infernal…

It was a leviathan’s back on which I
felt the tires unrolling a chilled grief ~

Owlish-full, a hypnotic moon, ‘n Dido
reminiscing tunefully about surrender
negating white flags and loves forlorn...

Inside the eye, a wispy face smiled hi
and gently slid open a papery fusuma...

Dazed, I held her gaze, so undead
Round face framed in softest ether
exhaling cool peppermint to inhale ~

Amaranth rains of fleeting gardenia,
mildly-scented dawn's astral gloam ***


(11/2/2020)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Your style is so original, Susan. Reading you is like Perrier after tap water. Enjoyed the poetic flight with you and Janet ~ John
Watt Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 9:59 PM
P.S. My wife's name is Janet (and my sister is Susan!)
Woodrow Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Perrier! I feel so fancy now! hehe thank you John... glad you enjoyed it :)
Downing  Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Finely put together indeed. I know I’m going to enjoy to read your poems daily. Will take me a while but I’ll enjoy each beautiful piece :)
Woodrow Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:56 PM
thank you...with winter coming, I should have time to catch up on enjoyable reading too :)
Labyrinth Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 1:57 AM
I feel like a voyeur...simply put, beautiful.
Woodrow Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 5:44 AM
She has gone ghosting ... thank you :)
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