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Calculating Volume and Weight

a blackout freak out cube freezer and a fish tank mouth to mouth to mouth ;),

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/21/2020 2:30:00 AM

Maybe revival via "hand to mouth." I appreciated your thoughts on MATTER. Brought my comment 2 u: "ThanX Maureen, U probably hear that "stuff" in the universe, even BLACK HOLES - largest with greatest gravity measured - have "nothing". As I wrote b4, "NOTHING means no THING" not "nothing at al." What we call "nothing" is SPACE, the very canvas, or BACKGROUND on which the stars & galaxies are laid out. Not easy to grasp but your intuition will get you there & beyond. shalom shalOM."

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 5/19/2020 6:53:00 PM

P. T. I've read a number of your fascinating writes this eve! You have a very special talent for projecting in just a few words, insightful wisdom with great wit! Glad you enjoyed the Clutter write. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/20/2020 6:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert, for perusing my page and your warm response! All the best to you, and take care ~ Maureen

John Watt

Date: 5/19/2020 11:50:00 AM

My dad used to have these fish in his tank called "Kissing Gourami". They would open their mouths real wide and appear to kiss each other. I always thought they were trying to give mouth-to-mouth resuscitation... it's believed that it is more of an aggressive behaviour, like staking out its territory. Enjoyed your write, especially liked your clever title ~ John

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 12:58:00 PM

Those look like funny fish! Fortunately my 2 goldfish and pleco are safe and I'm not dizzy from blowing bubbles (they're in a pretty big tank) ;), Have a lovely day John. ~mo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/18/2020 7:06:00 PM

Perhaps some mad scientist antics going on here ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/19/2020 12:55:00 PM

Lol! I wrapped the freezer in sheep skins and wished I had a winding egg beater for the fish tank ;), xomo!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2020 9:59:00 PM

Always a surprise with you... (if I tried resuscitating a fish, especially a tiny one, I'd fear accidentally swallowing the poor thing .... not a pleasant thought).

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 2:38:00 PM

Fortunately, nobody had to get their lips wet. ;),

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/17/2020 1:52:00 PM

Oh boy, resuscitating a fish...can't be pleasant.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/17/2020 2:43:00 PM

No mouth to mouth ;), you gently move them forwards and backwards in water. (phew!) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2020 9:00:00 PM

you are a hoot, my friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/17/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you dear! xomo <3

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/16/2020 10:02:00 AM

Who mentioned blackout... Fish for generators union...All fish holder must have one...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 11:45:00 AM

Hah! Actually, in my "Homesteader's Handbook" I have two sets of plans for a dog powered mill. ;), xomo!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2020 6:56:00 AM

Ooooooooooooooooh I am picturing an open mouthed kiss with a dead fish for some odd reason.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 8:55:00 AM

...they were eventually rehomed to a big pond. :),

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 8:54:00 AM

LOL! Fortunately, the outage resolved quicker than they said, the fish and the freshly stocked freezer are fine. Did have to revive the koi, the night we brought it home it escaped the tank. Lost all it's fins. It was freaked out. I figured out it had tried to get to where the water was coming from because it had no fellow koi, just 2 goldfish; I got another koi and it followed her around, relearning how to be a koi. They are social animals, need their own kind. xomo