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Cagey Canary

The canary sat atop his cage, And thought to himself, I got you Paige! While Paige sat trapped in tight, Thinking about the fight, And plotting to kill in angry rage.

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Date: 3/25/2024 12:05:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, Your poem is clever and intriguing with a twist of dark humor. The juxtaposition of the canary's apparent triumph and Paige's simmering anger creates a compelling narrative. I love how the poem's brevity adds to its impact, leaving readers both amused and contemplative. Well done on crafting such an engaging piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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