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Caged By Love

I am unstrung pearls, rolling about in the dark that dying ember that once was a glowing spark a flower petal, fallen lying withered on the ground the wind, now hushed too diminished to blow around a drop of cold wax where once a warm candle burned a heart, sadly imprisoned caged by a love that was spurned a whisper, never spoken silenced by promises now broken a grain of sand stuck in time held captive inside an hourglass a thousand tears wept while I wait for heartache to pass

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Date: 11/17/2021 11:52:00 AM
Went back to an older poem, only to find a jewel. Excellent description of the process one is forced into when love is loss or forsaken. Having experience this after years of commitment made my world seem totally chaotic. Think on eternal things and solid ground will appear. Place new seeds of hope there and Love will find your Loving heart and comfort you. Bless you and your gift of poetic expression Jenna. A poet friend, Bill
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/17/2021 1:05:00 PM
I'm delighted that you went back to this one, Bill. I had to reread it, but I too, love it. I'm so appreciative of you reading my earlier posts, and thank you most sincerely.
Date: 6/29/2021 5:49:00 AM
Your pain can be felt flowing through this piece like water down a drain and my heart is left swirling around, directionless. Very emotional write Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/17/2021 1:03:00 PM
What a wonderful critique, Phil. Thank you!
Date: 6/27/2021 12:59:00 PM
A wonderful write Jenna, most of us can relate to a heartbreak such as this. One has to dust themselves down and get over it, though it’s not easy… Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/17/2021 1:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Date: 6/26/2021 3:04:00 AM
I love this one absolutely, Jenna, a fave:) this simply flows in its beautiful sadness many can relate to:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2021 10:15:00 AM
I am humbled by your comments, Jo. Thanks.
Date: 6/25/2021 10:50:00 AM
Very well written, Jenna. Sadly, some folks never fully recover.
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:15:00 AM
Lost love so popular a subject. I am lost too.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/25/2021 6:47:00 AM
I was lost a thousand tears ago but no longer. I will write something cheery later to make you smile. Hugs!
Date: 6/25/2021 5:17:00 AM
The breakup of a relationship can be devastating and can take a while to come to terms with it. You captured the heartache well Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 6/25/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. It's been a while, but those thoughts still surface occasionally.

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