Caged By Love

I am unstrung pearls,
   rolling about in the dark

that dying ember
   that once was a glowing spark

a flower petal, fallen
   lying withered on the ground

the wind, now hushed
   too diminished to blow around

a drop of cold wax
   where once a warm candle burned

a heart, sadly imprisoned
   caged by a love that was spurned

a whisper, never spoken
   silenced by promises now broken

a grain of sand stuck in time
   held captive inside an hourglass

a thousand tears wept
   while I wait for heartache to pass
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Baker Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Went back to an older poem, only to find a jewel. Excellent description of the process one is forced into when love is loss or forsaken. Having experience this after years of commitment made my world seem totally chaotic. Think on eternal things and solid ground will appear. Place new seeds of hope there and Love will find your Loving heart and comfort you. Bless you and your gift of poetic expression Jenna. A poet friend, Bill
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:05 PM
I'm delighted that you went back to this one, Bill. I had to reread it, but I too, love it. I'm so appreciative of you reading my earlier posts, and thank you most sincerely.
Capitano Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:49 AM
Your pain can be felt flowing through this piece like water down a drain and my heart is left swirling around, directionless. Very emotional write Jenna.
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:03 PM
What a wonderful critique, Phil. Thank you!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 12:59 PM
A wonderful write Jenna, most of us can relate to a heartbreak such as this. One has to dust themselves down and get over it, though it’s not easy… Belle
Logan Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Daniel Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 3:04 AM
I love this one absolutely, Jenna, a fave:) this simply flows in its beautiful sadness many can relate to:)
Logan Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 10:15 AM
I am humbled by your comments, Jo. Thanks.
Turner Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Very well written, Jenna. Sadly, some folks never fully recover.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Lost love so popular a subject. I am lost too.
Logan Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 6:47 AM
I was lost a thousand tears ago but no longer. I will write something cheery later to make you smile. Hugs!
Cunningham Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 5:17 AM
The breakup of a relationship can be devastating and can take a while to come to terms with it. You captured the heartache well Jenna. Tom
Logan Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Thanks, Tom. It's been a while, but those thoughts still surface occasionally.
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