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Cage of Glass

You don’t know me… You don’t know my past… If you did would you judge me for my pain so vast? Did you hear about that one baby girl? No one was there to save her faded world The one who was forced to do bad things A child to never dream of queens and kings Did you know her mother denied any blame Could you ever understand any of her shame…. Did you know he’d come visit her every week And that she wasn’t ever allowed to speak… Did you know he’d do that until she turned nine Did you know it messed up her young mind? Could you feel her loneliness & the cold Did you know at nine she felt so old You don’t know me! You don’t know my past.. if you did would you have taken time to ask Did you know at thirteen, two men had their way She couldn’t tell, they’d say it was she who wanted to play Did you know she was lost and seen no reason All her teenage years, men she spent pleasing Did you know she had no self respect Growing harder, her intent was to protect Always trying to defend herself against the lies Would you believe at night one could hear her cries Did you know all the drama seemed to continue Did you know acts of kindness was far and few Do you know how much in life she had to endure Did you know she lacked any sense of secure Did you know how much she ached with pain Did you know that she could never complain Did you know how life was an exhausting blur But you should never pity or feel sorry for her You don’t know me You don’t know my past If you did would you think me to fast Did you know she wasn’t bitter towards all man kind Or that it was her smile she hid her tears behind Could you imagine she grew to be very strong How she knew best what was right and wrong Do you know she took that grief and pain Kept inside herself so she herself so she could maintain You know she turned it into her strength Do you know she’d help others going to any length It’s said she takes little things way to far Yet her purpose “help others reach for their star” Saying she’s a b**** and is way too hard But their opinions, she gives them no regard She became a great fighter for those she sees, living a life crying out for help to be free Giving a love she was never shown Would you still judge her if her past you’d known You don’t know me You don’t know my past If you did would you free me from my cage of glass

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Date: 5/15/2022 5:55:00 PM
A remarkable, hard hitting piece on a topic all too familiar in news headlines. Some statistics note one in three women have suffered abuse. It's all too prevalent. My piece "Life Surfaces" touched on a similar theme to yours but my poem was roundly rejected in contests. Sometimes the pain of living needs poetic form. Yours is a powerful write indeed. Be well. Brian
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Brian
Date: 2/26/2022 8:42:00 AM
When one who is is completely blameless is violated...no single shred of guilt can be attached to them. Woe be to those who attack the undefended...for they shall have same such misery heaped upon their heads. This is not Gods way...it is the fate they themselves have then chosen. Expect to be done unto...as you have done unto others. Powerful, powerful poetry!! With lots of affectionate admiration, Brenda. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:08:00 PM
He died a horrible death of cancer! One which my mother thought I should greave for him! Thank you John! ;(
Date: 2/8/2022 4:04:00 PM
It's so sad to think of it happening to people we know and love. I think I do not know anyone personally like this but a few girls who were "touched" inappropriately. A horrible way to spend one's childhood!!!
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Date: 2/7/2022 9:47:00 PM
A truly powerful poem. The title sums it up well. Nicely written. The pain is evident as well as the determination.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:09:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/6/2022 10:52:00 AM
i sure hope you are writing this from the point of view of another person and that it's not you personally. In any event, this is very powerful, Brenda. You have taken the theme of something very tragic in society and given voice to the pain it inflicts on the innocent.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/7/2022 8:23:00 PM
Well I will leave it at its a subject I know much about! And thank you Andrea!:(
Date: 2/6/2022 4:39:00 AM
Agree with Gershon, Brenda....to mine faves 2!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/7/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you James much appreciated!:)
Date: 2/5/2022 9:00:00 PM
The most powerful paean to overcoming unimaginable pain that I've read in a long, long time Brenda. Straight to my FAVES. ~ Light, Love and Hope. Thanks, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2022 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Gershon!;)

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