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Cage of Glass

You don’t know me…
You don’t know my past…
If you did would you 
judge me for my pain so vast? 

Did you hear about 
that one baby girl?
No one was there 
to save her faded world 
The one who was forced 
to do bad things
A child to never dream 
of queens and kings 

Did you know her mother
denied any blame 
Could you ever understand 
any of her shame….
Did you know he’d come 
visit her every week
And that she wasn’t 
ever allowed to speak…

Did you know he’d do that
until she turned nine 
Did you know it messed up 
her young mind? 
Could you feel her 
loneliness & the cold 
Did you know at nine 
she felt so old 

You don’t know me! 
You don’t know my past.. 
if you did would you 
have taken time to ask

Did you know at thirteen, 
two men had their way 
She couldn’t tell, they’d say it 
was she who wanted to play 
Did you know she was lost 
and seen no reason 
All her teenage years, 
men she spent pleasing 

Did you know she had 
no self respect 
Growing harder, her intent 
was to protect 
Always trying to defend 
herself against the lies 
Would you believe at night 
one could hear her cries 


Did you know all the drama 
seemed to continue 
Did you know acts of kindness 
was far and few
Do you know how much in life 
she had to endure 
Did you know she lacked 
any sense of secure

Did you know how much 
she ached with pain 
Did you know that she 
could never complain 
Did you know how life 
was an exhausting blur 
But you should never pity 
or feel sorry for her

You don’t know me 
You don’t know my past 
If you did would you 
think me to fast 

Did you know she wasn’t bitter 
towards all man kind 
Or that it was her smile 
she hid her tears behind 
Could you imagine she 
grew to be very strong 
How she knew best 
what was right and wrong 

Do you know she took 
that grief and pain 
Kept inside herself so she herself 
so she could maintain 
You know she turned 
it into her strength 
Do you know she’d help 
others going to any length 

It’s said she takes little 
things way to far 
Yet her purpose “help others 
reach for their star”
Saying she’s a  b****
and is way too hard 
But their opinions, she 
gives them no regard 

She became a great fighter 
for those she sees, 
living a life crying out 
for help to be free
Giving a love she 
was never shown 
Would you still judge her 
if her past you’d known 

You don’t know me 
You don’t know my past 
If you did would you 
free me from my cage of glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 5/15/2022 5:55:00 PM
A remarkable, hard hitting piece on a topic all too familiar in news headlines. Some statistics note one in three women have suffered abuse. It's all too prevalent. My piece "Life Surfaces" touched on a similar theme to yours but my poem was roundly rejected in contests. Sometimes the pain of living needs poetic form. Yours is a powerful write indeed. Be well. Brian
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Brian
Date: 2/26/2022 8:42:00 AM
When one who is is completely blameless is violated...no single shred of guilt can be attached to them. Woe be to those who attack the undefended...for they shall have same such misery heaped upon their heads. This is not Gods way...it is the fate they themselves have then chosen. Expect to be done unto...as you have done unto others. Powerful, powerful poetry!! With lots of affectionate admiration, Brenda. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:08:00 PM
He died a horrible death of cancer! One which my mother thought I should greave for him! Thank you John! ;(
Date: 2/8/2022 4:04:00 PM
It's so sad to think of it happening to people we know and love. I think I do not know anyone personally like this but a few girls who were "touched" inappropriately. A horrible way to spend one's childhood!!!
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Date: 2/7/2022 9:47:00 PM
A truly powerful poem. The title sums it up well. Nicely written. The pain is evident as well as the determination.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/21/2022 9:09:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/6/2022 10:52:00 AM
i sure hope you are writing this from the point of view of another person and that it's not you personally. In any event, this is very powerful, Brenda. You have taken the theme of something very tragic in society and given voice to the pain it inflicts on the innocent.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/7/2022 8:23:00 PM
Well I will leave it at its a subject I know much about! And thank you Andrea!:(
Date: 2/6/2022 4:39:00 AM
Agree with Gershon, Brenda....to mine faves 2!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/7/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you James much appreciated!:)
Date: 2/5/2022 9:00:00 PM
The most powerful paean to overcoming unimaginable pain that I've read in a long, long time Brenda. Straight to my FAVES. ~ Light, Love and Hope. Thanks, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2022 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Gershon!;)

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