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Caffeine High

He works like a well-oiled machine But only when filled with caffeine No power within The caffeine is just a smoke screen He won’t even stop for cuisine So he’s string-bean thin Entry for Black-Eyed Susan’s Tail Rhyme contest. Written April 23, 2012.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 2:03:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2012 5:16:00 AM
you last line worked for me, carolyn.. congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:07:00 PM
You chose a really fun theme for yours. I like it a lot, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:46:00 PM
I drink gallons and it doesnt work for me...lol. Loved this..congrats LNC. BG
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:49:00 PM
I know some folks like this....living on caffine !! congrats on your win !!
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:46:00 AM
Enjoyed this funy write Carolyn.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:32:00 AM
lol...:) Congrats on your win Carolyn!!! love ya deb
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:29:00 AM
Carolyn congrats on your win..David
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Date: 4/24/2012 2:42:00 PM
Yep. I have the coffee habit - used to have to have a cigarette with it too. As for the "string bean thin?" No way, Jose. Got a chuckle out of this one. Love, daver
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Date: 4/24/2012 11:54:00 AM
"Caffeine High!" I Got it! Cute, as a coot! Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:25:00 PM
Ya should have put this under 'Limerick' Carolyn, cause it's funny...then again; it's kinda mind altering, thinking that most of us know a soul or two just like your description here ! Great write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week dear friend...much love, james
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