Caffeine Blues

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~Caffeine Blues~ (Nonet) I look at the clock and it is late Time to wake up and start new day Ticktock ticktock hear the clock Try to keep eyes open But can not do it Need that coffee Very bad to Get up Now Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 November.05.2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/6/2015 1:03:00 AM

Precisely beautiful dear Dorian... I hv missed ur work for quite sometime!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/8/2015 7:48:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Dr. Upma,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, and comments:)) I know and I've missed yours too.I'll visit you very soon dear friend:)You're very sweet!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)D .