Caff Or Decaff

some say I come on too strong. I consider that better than coming on too weak. much better.

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Daniel Schack

Date: 10/18/2023 1:26:00 AM

thank you.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/17/2023 8:16:00 PM

I enjoy metaphors. I guess everybody at times can go either way. A poem can be interpreted as weak or strong depending on it's message I think. A middle ground maybe, on what subject? I am a coffee addict and after reading this poem although it was metaphorical, I am yearning for a latte. :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/14/2018 11:32:00 AM

A great metaphor here. I compare myself to a cup of tea - not coming on too strong but strong enough Good luck with City Lights! B'Shalom Matthew Anish