Byu

Standing on the 'Y' mountain, our arms folded over the railing My father and I staring down at the college of my dreams Wishing, praying fervently that my dream of dreams will come true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 3:18 PM
A nice father, daughter moment. Congrats on your HM, J. Kim
Williams Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:01 PM
J, congrats on your win, hope your dream came true..David
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest J. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Beautiful poem JD.Congrats on your win.
Ball Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 9:01 AM
I hope so too my friend. Good Luck and Many Blessings to you. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 10:05 PM
Hey, how cool to find a BYU girl here. I graduated from there back in the 70's and now i live in PG? ARe you in my area??
Dover Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Nah, I'm in Maryland :) That's really cool though! I'm hoping to get into BYU to become an elementary school teacher
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