Bystander

As you sit in your car
All dressed in black.
 You know,
It didn’t have to end like this
Now as you think back you remember
The faint white scars etched in her fair skin
And the timid smile that hid years of despair
 You remember that time your friends saw her crying in the hall
You sat there and laughed as they tortured her
The times you saw her sitting alone at lunch
She looked up at you with pleading eyes
“Hey, can you help me,” they said.
You thought about it , but instead you pretended you didn’t see her
And you left her there, sad and alone
That pleading look now haunts you
It begged somebody, anybody for help
But why should you commit social suicide for her?
You just kept walking away, selfish
Now though, you think back to those boring assemblies
About bullying and what it could lead to
Why didn’t you just listen?!
Maybe you could have spoken up, or found her help
Its too late now though, as you walk up to her casket
To say your first and last words,
To a girl, whose real name
You never cared to learn
“I’m sorry…”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/22/2012 11:40:00 AM
Hi Tatiana.This impressed me so much,it brought tears to my eyes.I feel it is beautifully written and you have handled this emotive subject with sensitivity and compassion.Alot of schools are dealing with this now but sadly it has progressed to cyber bullying where it continues to hurt and destroy.In time maybe we will understand and change our thinking and our hearts.Thank you for this Tatiana.I would like to have it as a favourite .Also I congratulate you on being featured. Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 3/22/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured write this week Tatiana. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/21/2012 8:32:00 AM
this is very moving - thank you for writing this
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Date: 9/21/2011 5:56:00 PM
this is really good!!!
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:23:00 PM
A moving write on the topic of Suicide, the underlying cause and apathy, very well written.
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, It feels really good to hear that.
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