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~~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~~ " come fluttering words, come drifting words to me . . ." Once upon a time in a vicinity, year 1895 A maiden's dwelling in an old-fashioned antique edifice Lavishing her every second in an everlasting woe Cursed by her yesterday's ordeal An appalling juncture - Striking ... Mind still delineate the affliction Coercing herself to bury the reminiscence Yet every single thing she sees is a replica Reflects the montage of the man Living alone in the rocking chair Sited in a chamber beside the glass window Overlooking outside " his " small world Isolated...quarantined - declining with his incorrigible ailment That aged man...around 90's - grey haired Crease are seen - brought by the yesteryears suffrage Eyes almost close - going to surrender everything No words come out - voiceless Yet words come fluttering and drifting to him Through " his " heart's voice of love... Retrospection stocked in nowhere in space... Little by little ALZHEIMER'S DISEASE masticating his very last breath. . . . . . . Now, residing solely - she's so sick In this vintage, life-vacated home Together with the last flowers Given before " his " death The only reason why she's still breathing for life Petals are falling like raindrops as her tears do so Almost ceasing her life too with the malaise As the flower abandoned by its only glory Wishing to go where her father go. ~~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ *-* ~~~~~~ =========================================== *-* *-* jun-jun villanueva *-* *-* " WHAT IS SHE THINKING " contest *-* *-* July 15, 2011

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Date: 7/28/2011 11:43:00 PM
This is wonderful jun-jun. Many congrats for this well deserved win.
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Date: 7/28/2011 1:01:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, jun-jun
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Date: 7/28/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your special poem placing in Constance La France's "What is she thinking" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2011 6:14:00 AM
hey jun-jun, cracking win congrats, David
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Date: 7/28/2011 1:54:00 AM
go, jun!..… congrats on your shimmering win!..happy smiles to you! :) hugggs!
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:33:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on a spectacular first place win luv.. so honored to share first place with u .. super beautiful one..luv..
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations Jun-Jun on a shared first place win in my contest, with this beautiful poem, I think your layouts are so creative ~~
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:39:00 AM
Wow...this is great....good job...thanks for commenting on my work....
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:39:00 AM
Wow...this is great....good job...thanks for commenting on my work....
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