Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Tanka

Bye-Bye

Stay away from me
Our good times have gone away
Cheaters never win
Come on sing me a sad song
So I can laugh, while you cry


Written for: "Tanka"me" a sad song Contest
Sponsored by: ~P.D.~
Written by: Carol Brown
6th Place Winner

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November 23, 2017 at 3:48 PM So amazing! I git the point.

Dorian Petersen Potter September 12, 2014 at 3:21 PM Very good Tanka, Carol! Yes, cheaters get caught sooner or later. And like the say, And what goes around, comes around" sad but nice poem! Best to you Carol! xxxx D.

Gerald Kithinji August 3, 2013 at 7:16 AM And winners never cheat! I love it.

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 9:11 PM yes.. a wonderful win in my contest... sad i must say...pd

Cecilia Macfarlane December 5, 2012 at 7:40 AM Carol....this write is judicious! Love it! Congrats on your win! Hugs

Trevor Bain December 4, 2012 at 2:34 PM Good write.... Seems that you'v won - Trevor

Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 7:23 AM One of the most painful words to hear for me is "Good bye". It was such a perfect topic chosen for the theme and form my dear friend. My big congratulations on your awesome win! love/hugs:) Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 23, 2012 at 4:43 AM Congratulations on your fine win Carol xx

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2012 at 3:49 PM Way to go in PD's contest a well deserved win for you, carol.

Bukang Liwayway October 22, 2012 at 12:35 PM Congratulations on your win friend Carol :) I can relate to your poem (^_^) nice tanka!!

Carol Sunshine Brown October 22, 2012 at 11:52 AM Thank you all for the comments and congrats. They are always appreciated. Love, Carol XXXX

Jonas L. Rozario October 22, 2012 at 9:11 AM Carol many congrats on your win...great write!!!

Black Eyed Susan October 22, 2012 at 7:21 AM Congrats on another win with this one!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 21, 2012 at 4:18 PM CONGRATS CAOL SUNSHINE ON AAN EXCITING WIN FOR A SUPERB TANKA LUV ..

Francine Roberts October 21, 2012 at 2:40 PM great job Carol, congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A October 21, 2012 at 11:51 AM Carol, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

Black Eyed Susan October 16, 2012 at 8:22 AM I like the anger in this - nicely done! good luck in the contest :)

Omneya Kamal October 12, 2012 at 5:43 AM This is so touching! loved it!

Apoorva Patrikar October 11, 2012 at 9:36 AM intriguing lines!

Debbie Duncan October 11, 2012 at 12:24 AM very nice,,,, I like it Carol ;}

Erich Goller October 10, 2012 at 7:59 PM Bye- Bye indeed, a very nice expressed Tanka, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs! Erich

Joe Maverick October 10, 2012 at 10:50 AM I see you got on top of the twist here Carol Thank you for your kind comment on my Poems feature.."

Jack Ellison October 10, 2012 at 5:58 AM Just rewards! Great Tanka... tanka you very much! LOL Hugs, happy thoughts and much love, Jack xox

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2012 at 11:06 PM Yes, this is GREAT.

Frederick Viedge October 9, 2012 at 5:49 PM Nailed it! And funny, really nice.

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