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Bye Bye, I'm Off to Mars

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Redlight One to Mission Control! Can you read me, Can you read me? Are you there? Has the comet hit you yet? Did the 'Nuke it Baby' missile work? Can you read me? Can you read me? Perhaps not! Oh well, here we all are, in our tin can spaceship, with our tin can robots driving the show. With all our tin can things on board. Tin can demountables for our homes. Tin can of food on board stored. Tin cans of water and all else we need. Bit like camping in our teens. For our colonization of Mars, needs all these tin cans to succeed, for a life live'n forever in, and outta a tin can. Hide the can opener from Elon! Please!

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