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i have broken her heart She has torn my shirt She was i got But now she is gone Gone foreal i dont Know what to do she made my days better It seems i made hers bitter At night she was my glitter But i treated her like a litter I feel guilty like osama bin laden Who will take this burden I wish i had wings like a raven Or i had powers to change the number of days in a year to seven From day one i knew she was my match We have been great with only scratches on our backs She has used on me more than a milli bucks And all i wish her is good luck bye bye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/24/2016 7:22:00 PM
Peter, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:23:00 PM
Peter, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:54:00 PM
Welcome to Soup! If you need any help please don't hesitate to ask...Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2013 11:24:00 AM
nicely resolved, Peter sometimes we have to let the ones we love to go for us to have that satisfaction the loving heart craves, nice poem! keep them coming
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Date: 12/24/2012 1:22:00 AM
Poignant write this! I love how you've developed the theme of love and pain. In life, to find love is bliss but when that love is torn it can be sheer torture. You've brought it out well. Well done and keep writing!
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Date: 12/21/2012 11:30:00 AM
Hi Peter, and a warm welcome to the site. I look forward to reading some more of your work xx
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Date: 12/19/2012 11:30:00 AM
PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Peter. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2012 2:34:00 AM
catherine..poetry is not all about pleasing people, its all about expressing ones feelings thats why poetry is an art, if u dont like my work its well and good then dont comment over it.. By you reading it full showa thats its good if it wasnt you couldnt hhave read it all , :D
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