Bye Bye

i have broken her heart
She has torn my shirt
She was i got
But now she is gone
Gone foreal i dont
Know what to do
she made my days better
It seems i made hers bitter
At night she was my glitter
But i treated her like a litter
I feel guilty like osama bin laden
Who will take this burden
I wish i had wings like a raven
Or i had powers to change the number of 
days in a year to seven
From day one i knew she was my match
We have been great with only scratches on 
our backs
She has used on me more than a milli bucks
And all i wish her is good luck
bye bye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 9:23 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Peter, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Peter, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Guzzi Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Welcome to Soup! If you need any help please don't hesitate to ask...Light & Love
Ongawo Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 11:24 AM
nicely resolved, Peter sometimes we have to let the ones we love to go for us to have that satisfaction the loving heart craves, nice poem! keep them coming
Tsiluma Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Poignant write this! I love how you've developed the theme of love and pain. In life, to find love is bliss but when that love is torn it can be sheer torture. You've brought it out well. Well done and keep writing!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Hi Peter, and a warm welcome to the site. I look forward to reading some more of your work xx
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 11:30 AM
PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Peter. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Kamau Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 2:34 AM
catherine..poetry is not all about pleasing people, its all about expressing ones feelings thats why poetry is an art, if u dont like my work its well and good then dont comment over it.. By you reading it full showa thats its good if it wasnt you couldnt hhave read it all , :D
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