Bye Bye

I wish I had wings.
So I could fly
I would float up
To a clear, bright blue sky
And wave this troubled world,
Goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Me, too... No doubt you and I would fly to another world, find it even more screwed up than this one, and be back in a hurry to say 'Hello!' ~ Absence makes the Heart Grow Fonder...
Hawkins Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 8:54 PM
I intend to encourage my loved ones to fly with me, and hopefully the place were we finish up together has more common sense and compassion than this deeply troubled world we occupy. ( In my dreams, Gershon)
Leffanta Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 11:37 AM
The higher you fly, the darker it gets . . . .Aloha!
Hawkins Avatar
October 5, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Only if you allow success to go to your head, sadly too many do. Thank you for your comments, Rico, they always make me think.
Baker Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 8:47 PM
I"m with you, Shirley. The flight sounds delightful. Thanks for the uplifting verse, my friend. Bill
Hawkins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 10:17 PM
My heart goes out to the people around the world who are desperate for peace, I am sure they would rather be looking down from above at this present time. I am pleased my verse gave you a lift, my friend.
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 6:17 PM
This is a pleasant little poem, Shirley, which is often how many of us feel. Thanks for sharing.
Hawkins Avatar
October 4, 2022 at 10:22 PM
Thank you for reading it, Milt. There are so many that are far worse than I, life must be unbearable for them. This insurgence was totally unnecessary. I hope all is as well as can be with you, Milt
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