Bye

Last night
it rained

My pillow
was soaked

The pain
was gone but

The dread
remained

Your soul
gone,

too soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 1, 2017 at 5:35 AM
Sir Darren White, the poem is actually dedicated to the fallen young men in uniform in our country! :)
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June 1, 2017 at 3:26 AM
That is a beautiful and sad poem. It's absolutely great!
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January 4, 2026 at 11:32 AM
Thank you Sir!
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May 31, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Mystic Rose, thank you for the help! The revision was great!
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