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Last night it rained My pillow was soaked The pain was gone but The dread remained Your soul gone, too soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/1/2017 5:35:00 AM
Sir Darren White, the poem is actually dedicated to the fallen young men in uniform in our country! :)
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Date: 6/1/2017 3:26:00 AM
That is a beautiful and sad poem. It's absolutely great!
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Date: 5/31/2017 5:54:00 AM
Mystic Rose, thank you for the help! The revision was great!
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