By Your Side

As the time flies ever so fast, You and I know our friendship will last As the sun announces the arrival of dawn, The clock of precious existence is forced to tick on When the stars gently twinkle in the sky, Lighting up our canvas of unremitting life, The earth will uncover the iridescent sea Revealing a smooth pathway for you and me But if the earth and its inhabitants spit us out, We still have the universe to ourselves, no doubt! There is nothing anyone can possibly do To tear me away from the likes of you Unless of course you request some space, I’ll stay on hold and patiently wait No matter where you go, name it; here or there No matter how far, I will surely be there So lastly, at the conclusion of this letter, I wish upon you happy years to come, forever For until that clock decides to end its chime You can be sure to find me by your side Always, Laura Elizabeth Breidenthal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Stinson Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:08 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it!
Goff Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 9:19 PM
fine tribute, Laura! jimbo
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February 6, 2012 at 5:02 PM
Laura this was so enjoyable , eternity with the one you love is never long enough , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx
Clark Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Such a passion and caring for someone has been written so beautifully by you. Great job
Breidenthal Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Thanks!
Peranteau Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Such a beautiful way to say I love you dear poet ! a wonderful and a lasting write Laura ! To mine favz of course ! Have a wonderful warm week....much love, james
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February 10, 2012 at 1:37 PM
:D:D:D
Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Wanted to say congrats on your winning work "The Grieving Process" but my computer just sits there and spends and won't go to your work..Enjoyed reading this creative work..Very expressive...Sara
Breidenthal Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:38 PM
yay! I edited it and now it's working! Fwee~
Breidenthal Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:20 PM
This seems to be happening to me too. I should probably repost it because for some reason it just isn't loading!
Johnson Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:28 PM
great flow of verse, and well done here, good rhyme to nurse, hot enough 4 beer, just now here.....the thirst:)
Breidenthal Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:38 PM
:D Thankies dearest.
James Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:01 PM
Love this Laura, especially the acknowledgement of the need for space. and thank you for your thoughts when visiting my ocean of dragons, Wordancer
Prophet Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:35 PM
Thank you, Laura...
Breidenthal Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Um...your welcome?
Cooper Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:30 PM
wonderfully penned
Breidenthal Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Gracias!
Pettit Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:05 PM
A nice poetic way to tell somebody that you will always be by their side. Good work Laura.
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