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By the Water's Edge

Beside a babbling brook I browse
By a bridge braving bleak winters breeze
Beaver is busily burrowing beneath 
Before bitter blizzards batter beaver’s bunker
Beaver beavering as he barricades the breach

Bedtime beckons before darkness befalls, but my
Bright my blue backpack bounces into the babbling brook
Begetting a bung of blue, Beaver buttresses his breach
Bewitched by Beaver’s busyness and bidding him bye bye
Before a blizzard begins bouncing big ice balls from the sky

Back inside my bungalow beside a burning fire
Buoyant my backpack had blocked Beaver’s breach
Bedtime was beckoning as I began to fall asleep
But beaming - for my backpack had really worked a treat 
By bunging Beaver's breach beside a babbling brook 
Burgeoning with self-belief I’ll write a ‘Beaver Bedtime Book’

Written: 1st April 2019

2nd PLACE
Contest:  Pick A Title, Vol 3 Alliteration - By The Water's Edge                      |
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

3rd PLACE
Contest:  CONTEST no 620 in alliteration style,any theme ,any form 
Sponsor: Brian Strand

Contest Name	Alliteration 004
Sponsor Poet Destroyer 
22nd October 2020

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Date: 4/2/2019 3:15:00 PM
very cute, I chose that same title but did mine totally different. I used tow or three different alliterations too. The sponsor was not too precise on that aspect. I hope I did not mess up (mine is not posted yet) I love how you focused on B's. Mine was primarily S's!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/3/2019 12:08:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea for your lovely comments and good luck with your alliteration. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/1/2019 7:29:00 PM
If I had to try to say even two of these lines in a row, my tongue would betwixt between beside beyond belief.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/2/2019 3:04:00 PM
Yes I know the feeling Caren, it has certainly turned into a tongue twister. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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