Line Gauthier Poet Alliteration

By the Water's Edge

Beloved bohemian bucolic bluegrass 
Yielding yonder yellowed younger yesterdays

Tattered thoughts travel to the twilight temple 
Hillside hoisted homage of honeysuckle happenstance
Elusive enchanted elixir emanates exquisitely 
 
Whispered wisdom while waltzing walkabout
Aromas adrift awaken avid awestruck angels 
Trembling trees transcend tacit timelessness
Entwined embrace enamored encounters 
Romantic ritual of rhythmic rippling reverie 
Stunning stage sacred sanctuary secluded 

Epitome of enlightened effervescence emerges
During dusk dangling dreamy delectable delights
Guileless gracefully guarded gem’s glow
Exploring enigmatic edge’s ephemeral essence 



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 25, 2019 for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL.3 ALLITERATION: BY THE WATER'S EDGE sponsored by EDWARD IBEH  -  RANKED 2ND

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Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2019 at 8:37 PM Wow, this is very impressive Line! Not only is it alliteration filled but an Acrostic! Congratulations on your well deserved high placement! : ) xxoo

Timothy Mcguire March 26, 2019 at 5:04 PM Well written, A lot of thought went into this fine poem! Line Gauthier March 26, 2019 at 8:51 PM Thanks for the compliment, Timothy.

M. L. Kiser March 26, 2019 at 10:31 AM Brilliant Acrostic Alliteration; still the imagery here is vibrant and this unrolls like a canvas one is about to re-stretch for hanging. I wouldn't have thought this would've worked out so visual but it did. Brilliantly done. Good luck in the contest. Line Gauthier March 26, 2019 at 1:15 PM Thank you so much for your delightful visit and most appreciated compliment, ML.

Rhona Mcferran March 25, 2019 at 9:50 PM Wow! Very cleverly (and beautifully) constructed... Great work! ;) Line Gauthier March 25, 2019 at 9:57 PM Thank you so much, Rhona, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.