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By the Water's Edge

Beloved bohemian bucolic bluegrass Yielding yonder yellowed younger yesterdays Tattered thoughts travel to the twilight temple Hillside hoisted homage of honeysuckle happenstance Elusive enchanted elixir emanates exquisitely Whispered wisdom while waltzing walkabout Aromas adrift awaken avid awestruck angels Trembling trees transcend tacit timelessness Entwined embrace enamored encounters Romantic ritual of rhythmic rippling reverie Stunning stage sacred sanctuary secluded Epitome of enlightened effervescence emerges During dusk dangling dreamy delectable delights Guileless gracefully guarded gem’s glow Exploring enigmatic edge’s ephemeral essence AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 30, 2022 for contest ALLITERATION - OLD OR NEW sponsored by JOSEPH MAY on March 28, 2022 for contest MY LOST AND FOUND LOVE sponsored by JCB BRUL on March 25, 2019 for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL.3 ALLITERATION: BY THE WATER'S EDGE sponsored by EDWARD IBEH - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 4/24/2019 8:37:00 PM
Wow, this is very impressive Line! Not only is it alliteration filled but an Acrostic! Congratulations on your well deserved high placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/26/2019 5:04:00 PM
Well written, A lot of thought went into this fine poem!
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Date: 3/26/2019 8:51:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Timothy.
Date: 3/26/2019 10:31:00 AM
Brilliant Acrostic Alliteration; still the imagery here is vibrant and this unrolls like a canvas one is about to re-stretch for hanging. I wouldn't have thought this would've worked out so visual but it did. Brilliantly done. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/26/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for your delightful visit and most appreciated compliment, ML.
Date: 3/25/2019 9:50:00 PM
Wow! Very cleverly (and beautifully) constructed... Great work! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

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