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BY THE WATER'S EDGE



Beloved bohemian bucolic bluegrass 
Yielding yonder a yellow younger yesterday 

Tattered thoughts travel to the twilight temple 
Hillside hoisted homage of honeysuckle happenstance
Elusive enchanted elixir emanates exquisitely 

Whispers of wisdom while waltzing walkabout
Aromas adrift awaken avid awestruck angels 
Trembling trees transcend tacit timelessness
Entwined embrace enamored encounters 
Romantic ritual of rhythmic rippling reverie 
Stunning stage sacred sanctuary secluded 

Epitome of enlightened effervescence emerges
During dusk dangling dreamy delectable delights
Guileless gracefully guarded gem’s glow
Exploring enigmatic edge’s ephemeral essence 



Submitted on March 25, 2019, for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL.3 ALLITERATION: BY THE WATER'S EDGE sponsored by EDWARD IBEH  -  RANKED 2ND

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Date: 4/24/2019 8:37:00 PM
Wow, this is very impressive Line! Not only is it alliteration filled but an Acrostic! Congratulations on your well deserved high placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 3/26/2019 5:04:00 PM
Well written, A lot of thought went into this fine poem!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2019 8:51:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Timothy.
Date: 3/26/2019 10:31:00 AM
Brilliant Acrostic Alliteration; still the imagery here is vibrant and this unrolls like a canvas one is about to re-stretch for hanging. I wouldn't have thought this would've worked out so visual but it did. Brilliantly done. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/26/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for your delightful visit and most appreciated compliment, ML.
Date: 3/25/2019 9:50:00 PM
Wow! Very cleverly (and beautifully) constructed... Great work! ;)
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Date: 3/25/2019 9:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.