Charles Messina Poet Alliteration

By the Waters Edge

seaweed stuck on sand 
seagulls seeking small shellfish
shirtless swimmers splash 

crawling crabs, claws clasped 
clams closed, coral chips and conch 
children's castle crafts  



Pick A Title, Vol. 3 Alliteration Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Edward Ibeh 
3-24-2019

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Eve Roper April 24, 2019 at 8:25 PM Charles, congratulations on your win! Great alterations , I find them hard to write to make them make sense... Hugs Eve

Lindsay Laurie March 25, 2019 at 5:17 PM G'day Charles … the border between shore and sea always brings up mystery and surprises. Thank you Charles - Lindsay

Mahtab Bangalee March 25, 2019 at 2:01 AM superb writings

Robert L. Hinshaw March 24, 2019 at 8:40 PM Great entry for the contest, Charles, and I predict that it will rate very hi - best of luck! Bob Charles Messina March 24, 2019 at 8:56 PM Hello Bob, great to see you dear friend. Thank you for the uplifting comment. I pray your doing well and in good health. God bless...Charlie

Jan Allison March 24, 2019 at 8:19 PM what a fabulous way to tackle the alliteration contest - 2 lovely haiku Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx Charles Messina March 24, 2019 at 8:35 PM You have just made my evening most enjoyable Jan. Thank you so much...Have a lovely evening. Hugs //Charlie xx