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By the Waters Edge

seaweed stuck on sand seagulls seeking small shellfish shirtless swimmers splash crawling crabs, claws clasped clams closed, coral chips and conch children's castle crafts Pick A Title, Vol. 3 Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsor Edward Ibeh 3-24-2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/24/2019 8:25:00 PM

Charles, congratulations on your win! Great alterations , I find them hard to write to make them make sense... Hugs Eve

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/25/2019 5:17:00 PM

G'day Charles … the border between shore and sea always brings up mystery and surprises. Thank you Charles - Lindsay

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/25/2019 2:01:00 AM

superb writings

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/24/2019 8:40:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, Charles, and I predict that it will rate very hi - best of luck! Bob

Charles Messina
Date: 3/24/2019 8:56:00 PM

Hello Bob, great to see you dear friend. Thank you for the uplifting comment. I pray your doing well and in good health. God bless...Charlie

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2019 8:19:00 PM

what a fabulous way to tackle the alliteration contest - 2 lovely haiku Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina
Date: 3/24/2019 8:35:00 PM

You have just made my evening most enjoyable Jan. Thank you so much...Have a lovely evening. Hugs //Charlie xx