Apurva Prabhudesai Poet Alliteration

By the Water Edge

By the water‘s edge 
I sit
Amongst the little white waves
And the whispering winds
Waiting wishing 
You would be back 

We parted ways 
The greener grass doesn’t exist 
Now as I stay on the sandy sands
A shooting star is all I need 

Date -31 March 2019

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Eve Roper April 24, 2019 at 8:29 PM Beautiful verse, Apurva,. Congratulations on your win! Apurva Prabhudesai April 26, 2019 at 1:36 AM Thanks a lot!

Caren Krutsinger March 30, 2019 at 9:52 PM Your ending line made me laugh. You stated it so matter-of-factly and casually, and it is usually not so casual as this. Loved that! Apurva Prabhudesai March 30, 2019 at 10:09 PM Thanks! Glad you liked it!