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By the water edge

By the water‘s edge I sit Amongst the little white waves And the whispering winds Waiting wishing You would be back We parted ways The greener grass doesn’t exist Now as I stay on the sandy sands A shooting star is all I need Date -31 March 2019

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Date: 4/24/2019 8:29:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Apurva,. Congratulations on your win!
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Apurva Prabhudesai
Date: 4/26/2019 1:36:00 AM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 3/30/2019 9:52:00 PM
Your ending line made me laugh. You stated it so matter-of-factly and casually, and it is usually not so casual as this. Loved that!
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Apurva Prabhudesai
Date: 3/30/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thanks! Glad you liked it!