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Contest- Sense of Taste 7/28/25

Sponsor-Nette Onclaud

the saltiness of my tears drips upon my lips and tongue after rolling down my face from the blandness of our love that was a savored passion until the dawn of heartbreak when our portions of love changed and love became spoiled and cold

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Date: 7/28/2025 4:13:00 PM
I enjoyed your lines! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 7/28/2025 11:27:00 AM
- This was beautiful, Frederic ... I got a little hung up on food ... and thought of nothing else :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/28/2025 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Anne for your kind reply...best wishes for yours also...

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