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She knows he’s out there For she’s heard his words whispered by the sea It doesn’t always feel so fair But, she will wait patiently What he wants, she has to give She imagines him on a boat afar For love forever, she knows they can live Faithfully bright as the moon and every star A light of inspiration, oh so true The water reaches closer to her As she sees visions in the ocean’s blue In this place where true love will stir As the calm sea settles her restless heart There’s one thing she doesn’t know He is standing right behind her to start Their new life together, he will show Heidi Sands 11/5/18 Placed 5th in the Tell me a story 2 poetry contest. *PHOTO 2

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Date: 11/26/2018 6:42:00 PM
This was really pretty, I loved the mini love story it tells!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2018 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Tyra. I appreciate your comment on this and happy you liked it :)
Date: 11/10/2018 2:21:00 AM
What a beautiful romance it will be too! Lovely poem Heidi, sometimes something or someone who were searching for is right there, but we can't see the wood for the trees! Well done and congratulations, Jennifer
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer :)
Date: 11/9/2018 8:32:00 AM
Hi Heidi, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved win. Have a wonderful Hugs....Mike. XX
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike . I appreciate it :) Have a nice day!
Date: 11/8/2018 6:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 11/8/2018 3:33:00 PM
Heidi, I love happy endings like this, I enjoyed your poem. Congrats. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thank you John :) I am happy you like it !
Date: 11/7/2018 6:26:00 PM
A very nice ending to this lovely write Heidi...GL in the contest..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/7/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph. It came to me, as I looked at the photo :)
Date: 11/6/2018 10:23:00 AM
Ooh a beautiful romantic story and the sea is the place for romance. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 11/5/2018 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful Heidi, A yearning fulfilled. It flowed like gentle waves on the sea. A lovely picture, perfect for this verse. Good luck!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/6/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your feedback, always :)
Date: 11/5/2018 4:51:00 PM
Some wonderful interpretations I've seen for this contest, this is another. Good luck. Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2018 5:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom :)
Date: 11/5/2018 2:54:00 PM
You read her mind and made her dream come true. Charming interpretation of the photo..delightfully rendered. Best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your feedback , always. I hope you are having a nice day :)
Date: 11/5/2018 2:28:00 PM
This was beautiful Heidi and I love the ending, she is staring out to the sea and he is standing right behind her. Best of luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Chris, it was just something I envisioned that came to mind, looking at the photo. I appreciate your comment and feedback :)

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