By the River - Sal Ne

One sunset in mid September 
I sat alone by the river 
Watching white birds fly together
Amidst rousing stormy weather

September 19, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:09 PM
A great little rhyme Roger. You set a peaceful, tranquil scene that was easy to visualise (at least until the storm arrived!). Just lovely. Thank you for sharing. :)
Roger  Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much...
Jones Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Ah peaceful by the river bird watching. Thanks for this little poetic escape!
Roger  Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Thank you very much...
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