Notes About The Poem

By the lake

Silken dreadlocks weeping in rhythm.
Attuned with the lightest gust of wind.
Beauty in a sweeping motion.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:49 PM
nice one!
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Much appreciated, thank you Sara ~
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