Maryam Musharraf Poet ABC

By No Means

That is nobody’s fault
                                     You said,
This window was closed from the very beginning
But my dear fellow!
                   You could have opened it
                                                             By means of a Smile!

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Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2018 at 7:29 PM This is impressive work, your very first post here. Nice to meet you and I hope to see you posting a lot more poems. Try some of the contests and use the themes for inspiration!

Eve Roper January 18, 2018 at 2:08 PM Maryam, love the way you expressed ," It could have open with a smile . Hugs Eve ~`*

Arturo Michael December 24, 2017 at 5:56 AM I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Maryam

Terry Shuff August 30, 2017 at 10:55 PM This poem, turns the action back to the one up set because the window was closed. I like your response to him, very clever and tactful.

Tahira Parveen August 28, 2017 at 2:07 PM Very well written Maryam, so true:-) Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Ravi Sathasivam August 28, 2017 at 8:35 AM Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed. Welcome to poetry soup. Keep write.