By Daylight View (Alliteration)

Spring showering shores
rabbits running round in amusing 
the glitter great glacier
been sparkle spends slightness by branches
wind witnesses willingly be affections
In reflection raised recreation. 

And sense a rat, small the tale it
Running stopped by  the torso as hulking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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January 6, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Hello friend and thank you for your comment. Wonderful use of alliteration here. A beautiful write! Love, Shar
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