Paula Goldsmith Poet Haiku

Buzzing Little Bees

buzzing little bees

make some sweet honey for me

buzz from rose to rose

 

Date Written: 8/17/2020

6 Place   Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Contest Judged: 8/22/2020             Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin         Buzzing Little Bees

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V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 2:23 AM Wow..lovely imagery.. Bees are the busiest tiny creatures.. Congratulations on your win Paula mam..:-) Keep inspiring... Take care.With love from Deepa:-) Paula Goldsmith August 27, 2020 at 2:12 PM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Bees sure are busy. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day...................

Eve Roper August 22, 2020 at 8:34 PM Congratulations on your win, Paula, great imagery. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 12:42 PM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Have a great day with a hug...................

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2020 at 1:35 PM so SWEET!! Congrats on your win , Paula. Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 12:41 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my sweet honey write. Have a wonderful day................

Tania Kitchin August 22, 2020 at 12:27 PM Paula congratulations on your winning placement with this sweet haiku! Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 12:39 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like it. Have a great day..........

Gershon Wolf August 17, 2020 at 5:03 PM I'm getting in line after you, Paula, for some of that sweetly made honey! ~ Bumble B. Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2020 at 10:55 AM Thanks for your note. A honey jar for you and one for me. Have a great day................

Tom Cunningham August 17, 2020 at 11:46 AM A lovely summer scene Paula, Love watching them in the garden, them hard at work, me relaxing. Hope alls well Tom Paula Goldsmith August 17, 2020 at 12:04 PM All OK Here. Thanks for your note. Sounds like a plan. Bees working and you resting/watching. Have a wonderful day watching the bees...............

John Watt August 17, 2020 at 11:33 AM I do so enjoy watching bees go about their business, especially knowing that they are helping flowers grow! Enjoyed your haiku. Enjoy your day ~ John Paula Goldsmith August 17, 2020 at 11:41 AM Thanks for your note. I also love to watch the bees at work. So cute and little. Glad you like this write. Have a great day................