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Buzzing For It's Life

It ducks and dives bouncing through the air buzzing for it's life free without care; now disappeared a silence, can't see it anywhere a mass of confusion It could be over there? As elusive as it is scheming, the lord of all flies, Who leaves me screaming, "Why are you so wise?!" Incognito, always in disguise It' colour deceitful a deep blue mottle A skydiver, a rocket, that's Mr. Bluebottle.

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Date: 9/12/2018 4:36:00 AM
I am seeing a blue fly. I have never heard of a bluebottle, but I am looking it up now. I like the quickness and subtle aliteration in this poem, Jim.
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