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Butts and Iffs

Butts and iffs Too bee or knot two bee, When hole poetree can bee red strait, Why mite we sale on the stormy waive ? Too bee or knot two bee, Throwns waited for there mitey kings, Morning there death butt time would sing, Two bee or knot too bee, Queen that rained(reigned) till cheque was maid, Umpires are lost in mad love race, Any lessens learnt ? It was her beau tea, he chose to dye for ? Or the throwns or umpires that were so mimely ? Pure love had one ( won) ! Written August 14th, 2015 For contest "Don't fight it- write it" by John

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Date: 8/30/2015 12:54:00 PM
Wonderfully and cleverly written poem this is. Good luck in the contest.
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David Fisher
Date: 8/30/2015 12:58:00 PM
Sorry I goofed and saw this was judged awhile back
Date: 8/17/2015 4:02:00 PM
hey COOL homophones!!
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Date: 8/17/2015 10:15:00 AM
An amusing poem, Upma. Julia, xx
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Date: 8/14/2015 1:33:00 PM
fine take on the theme, dr upma.. enjoyed the unique wordplay!.. huggs
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Date: 8/14/2015 1:18:00 PM
Great one Dr Sharma - have seen several others written with homophones including mine - seems a popular way to interpret the contest - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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