Butterfly Sleeves

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Sam’s butterfly sleeves, in pastel hurry, Gently billow like seagulls over feet. Indulgent, salted drops of sea, so sweet. Tan sand across her sandal straps, run free. 7/23/2021 Caren Krutsinger’s Flair and Fun Quatrain ABBA

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/24/2021 9:17:00 PM

Fun, for sure. Quite a picture you've created in four lines, Kim. G.L. in the contest. Happy Weekend, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2021 4:07:00 AM

Happy Weekend to you, dear friend! Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/23/2021 10:59:00 PM

Cute. I love seagulls. For me, short poems are very difficult. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2021 6:44:00 AM

I agree!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2021 5:29:00 PM

absolutely delightful the imagery is beautiful especially the first 2 line:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2021 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! Sometimes the brief ones are the hardest.