Kim Rodrigues Poet Quatrain

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Butterfly Sleeves

Sam’s butterfly sleeves, in pastel hurry,
Gently billow like seagulls over feet.
Indulgent, salted drops of sea, so sweet.
Tan sand across her sandal straps, run free.

7/23/2021
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Gershon Wolf July 24, 2021 at 9:17 PM Fun, for sure. Quite a picture you've created in four lines, Kim. G.L. in the contest. Happy Weekend, Gershon Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2021 at 4:07 AM Happy Weekend to you, dear friend! Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar July 23, 2021 at 10:59 PM Cute. I love seagulls. For me, short poems are very difficult. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues July 24, 2021 at 6:44 AM I agree!

Jan Allison July 23, 2021 at 5:29 PM absolutely delightful the imagery is beautiful especially the first 2 line:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues July 23, 2021 at 6:22 PM Thank you, Jan! Sometimes the brief ones are the hardest.