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Butterfly Schooling

I could find my child, who's a butterfly lover, Often bunking school granting many a reason; Knowing her mad love, over the air to hover, I allowed her to continue with no treason... Having decided to find the reason from her When, finally, persuaded her to open up; Observing sage-like silence and eyes with no blur, She blushed as though there's a tempest in her teacup... Pleasing, easing, teasing, tiring, tempting, mocking, Persuading, convincing, coercing, smooth-talking; Silver-tongued sweet words on her slowly showering, Ultimately, she spoke up as though rock-shocking... Does schooling teach one to fly like a butterfly? Does butterfly, in a school, ever long-time lie? 05 July 2021 Contemporary Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 8/25/2021 5:28:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, I adore your beautiful and beguiling sonnet. Your artistry and finesse captivated and charmed me. I admire your rhyme; "mocking/smooth-talking" so clever.. and the touches of alliteration and assonance that flit over your sweet lines like a butterfly. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/25/2021 12:33:00 PM
A grand write, Christuraj. Butterflies + children are inspiring. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 8/25/2021 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun~~story/write. I do not think butterflies can lie. Love This One. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 8/25/2021 5:57:00 AM
i really liked this, especially the alliteration and the unusual word combinations such as 'rock-shocking - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/25/2021 7:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/5/2021 4:34:00 AM
Amazing sonnet. All the best for contest. A winner for me
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/5/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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