Butterfly Schooling

I could find my child, who's a butterfly lover,
Often bunking school granting many a reason;
Knowing her mad love, over the air to hover,
I allowed her to continue with no treason...
	
Having decided to find the reason from her
When, finally, persuaded her to open up;
Observing sage-like silence and eyes with no blur,
She blushed as though there's a tempest in her teacup...

Pleasing, easing, teasing, tiring, tempting, mocking,
Persuading, convincing, coercing, smooth-talking;
Silver-tongued sweet words on her slowly showering,
Ultimately, she spoke up as though rock-shocking...

Does schooling teach one to fly like a butterfly?
Does butterfly, in a school, ever long-time lie?


05 July 2021
Contemporary Sonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot
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Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Dear Christuraj, I adore your beautiful and beguiling sonnet. Your artistry and finesse captivated and charmed me. I admire your rhyme; "mocking/smooth-talking" so clever.. and the touches of alliteration and assonance that flit over your sweet lines like a butterfly. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sambourne Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 12:33 PM
A grand write, Christuraj. Butterflies + children are inspiring. Congratulations! Brian
Goldsmith Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun~~story/write. I do not think butterflies can lie. Love This One. Have a blessed day................
Puddifoot Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:57 AM
i really liked this, especially the alliteration and the unusual word combinations such as 'rock-shocking - congrats on your win in my contest!
Alex Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Amazing sonnet. All the best for contest. A winner for me
Alex Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Thank you very much.
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