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Butterfly Romance

On a sofa we're lying My true love and I She's wiggling and sighing She thinks I'm touching her thigh She's getting excited and passionately we kiss But I am most curious to find out what made her like this I soon find the culprit who is making her sing A beautiful butterfly flickering its gossamer wings. The butterfly rises gracefully into the air We carry on our passion without any care Caressing each other’s bodies your words I love to hear Whispering your sweet nothings into my waiting ear Slowly you undress me I can feel my beating heart Our bodies come together I hope they never part Soon we are making love our bodies rise and fall Gosh we better hurry up my mother’s due to call We never heard Mum knocking and more alarmingly When she came into the room you were sat on top of me Don't mind me she whispers, Carry on oh daughter mine Be sure to ride your stallion to the winning line Then she went into the kitchen to make a cup of tea Leaving us on the sofa, Giggling uncontrollably We walked into the kitchen both wearing a deep red glow She scalded, Don't be silly, I was young once myself you know. That night as we lay in bed my hand cupping your breast I thought I felt that butterfly landing on my chest Then I realised it was deep inside where I felt those tiny feet My heart was growing more content with every single beat Next evening in your little black dress you look a true sensation The night we had looked forward to exceeded both of our expectations Everything was perfect, the meal, the wine, the dance Forever we'll have memories of our butterfly romance 26th May 2014 Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/3/2015 1:58:00 AM
Tis wonderful . But what else should one expect when one dances on air in love floating on butterfly wings. Soul mates you truely are. Please join together again I do not think that either can be complete without the other. Love your allweather friend Shane L
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Date: 6/21/2014 5:30:00 PM
Jadazzle This is a fun and creative love story that entertains in a charming and wonderful way. Thank you for the great comment on my Frigid Heart poem.
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Date: 6/21/2014 6:20:00 PM
Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Robin. We have so much fun when we write . Working as a team with Darren is a dream come true and the friendship we now have developed means the world to us both. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/29/2014 10:22:00 PM
that was funny when the mother walked in. Who thought that part up? you guys make an awesome team. That's all I can say!! REally cute way you related this to a butterfly.
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Date: 5/30/2014 1:15:00 AM
The fantastic thing about our writes Andrea is that no one knows who writes which lines which shows how we work in perfect harmony. we go with the flow and change nothing. Hugs as ever and thanks for your continued support. Jan xxx
Date: 5/29/2014 11:29:00 AM
What a lovely story. Love it...
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Date: 5/29/2014 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Betty it such fun to write with Darren - I end up getting ravished in some of the poems lol pure fantasy but its great fun! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 5/29/2014 7:20:00 AM
Hi Jan and Darren, This was clever and entertaining from start to finish! Well done! Thanks for sharing this write with us.My friends. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/29/2014 10:21:00 AM
Oh How I giggled when the mails flew between us Deborah but our work flows seamlessly verse by verse with no alteration, Still makes me smile when I read this. hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx
Date: 5/26/2014 8:32:00 AM
Quite romantic and passionate...Great job you two
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:29:00 AM
A bit of lighthearted fun with the jadazzle stamp of humour Tim :-) thanks for dropping by as ever Jan xxx

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