Butterfly Romance

On a sofa we're lying
My true love and I
She's wiggling and sighing
She thinks I'm touching her thigh
She's getting excited and passionately we kiss
But I am most curious to find out what made her like this
I soon find the culprit who is making her sing
A beautiful butterfly flickering its gossamer wings.

The butterfly rises gracefully into the air
We carry on our passion without any care
Caressing each other’s bodies your words I love to hear 
Whispering your sweet nothings into my waiting ear
Slowly you undress me I can feel my beating heart
Our bodies come together I hope they never part
Soon we are making love our bodies rise and fall
Gosh we better hurry up my mother’s due to call
 
We never heard Mum knocking and more alarmingly 
When she came into the room you were sat on top of me
Don't mind me she whispers, Carry on oh daughter mine
Be sure to ride your stallion to the winning line 
Then she went into the kitchen to make a cup of tea 
Leaving us on the sofa, Giggling uncontrollably 
We walked into the kitchen both wearing a deep red glow
She scalded, Don't be silly, I was young once myself you know.

That night as we lay in bed my hand cupping your breast
I thought I felt that butterfly landing on my chest 
Then I realised it was deep inside where I felt those tiny feet 
My heart was growing more content with every single beat
Next evening in your little black dress you look a true sensation
The night we had looked forward to exceeded both of our expectations
Everything was perfect, the meal, the wine, the dance
Forever we'll have memories of our butterfly romance 

26th May 2014
Written By Jan Allison & Darren Watson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Cooper Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 1:58 AM
Tis wonderful . But what else should one expect when one dances on air in love floating on butterfly wings. Soul mates you truely are. Please join together again I do not think that either can be complete without the other. Love your allweather friend Shane L
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June 21, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Jadazzle This is a fun and creative love story that entertains in a charming and wonderful way. Thank you for the great comment on my Frigid Heart poem.
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June 21, 2014 at 6:20 PM
Thanks as ever for the lovely comment Robin. We have so much fun when we write . Working as a team with Darren is a dream come true and the friendship we now have developed means the world to us both. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 29, 2014 at 10:22 PM
that was funny when the mother walked in. Who thought that part up? you guys make an awesome team. That's all I can say!! REally cute way you related this to a butterfly.
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May 30, 2014 at 1:15 AM
The fantastic thing about our writes Andrea is that no one knows who writes which lines which shows how we work in perfect harmony. we go with the flow and change nothing. Hugs as ever and thanks for your continued support. Jan xxx
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May 29, 2014 at 11:29 AM
What a lovely story. Love it...
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May 29, 2014 at 1:06 PM
Thanks Betty it such fun to write with Darren - I end up getting ravished in some of the poems lol pure fantasy but its great fun! Hugs Jan xxx
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May 29, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Hi Jan and Darren, This was clever and entertaining from start to finish! Well done! Thanks for sharing this write with us.My friends. Love and Peace, Deborah
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May 29, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Oh How I giggled when the mails flew between us Deborah but our work flows seamlessly verse by verse with no alteration, Still makes me smile when I read this. hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx
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May 26, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Quite romantic and passionate...Great job you two
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May 26, 2014 at 9:29 AM
A bit of lighthearted fun with the jadazzle stamp of humour Tim :-) thanks for dropping by as ever Jan xxx
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