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Butterfly Maiden

In the enchanted forest A maiden so fair Beautiful looks Long golden hair All around they flutter As one lands on her hand Its as if they have heard Her wishful command Their silky wings Membranes in view As they flutter at still A creature so true Graceful in delight Like this maiden so fair In the enchanted forest Oh! i wish i was there http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature3.php

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/14/2009 10:12:00 AM

I wish I was there too !! Another beautiful write , but this ones got that light touch I love ... beautiful and peaceful to read lovely ... Love Jayne x

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/11/2009 3:49:00 AM

beautiful write>>>charma:)

Yvette Deem

Date: 7/11/2009 1:49:00 AM

very beautiful poem, i so enjoyed it. thank you.

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 7/10/2009 5:30:00 PM

very pretty - images of a fairy like creature with golden hair - pink - mauve dress with butterflies all around her - well done..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2009 12:52:00 PM

This is super souper words. I enjoyed this one. It touched me across the Atlantic in this state of Georgia. Continue to pen those enchanting words. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2009 12:31:00 PM

Such a delightful scene of the woman attracting beautiful butterflies as she stands in the forest. There is a butterfly pavilion in Georgia where they actually do land on people. Such marvels of grace and beauty! Lovely poem, James! Love, Carolyn