Butterfly Love

I was a rose to 
    a butterfly love so brief
        Does he recall me? I hope

        Like a honey bee
    I sipped his love. Where is he?
He lives in my poetry

July 15, 2021
For 'A BRIAN STRAND your pick' Contest
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Hind Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Beautiful! <3
Kauffman Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Emotive, romantic and pensive Andrea! We do wonder about past loves! So well expressed! Congratulations!
Khan Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:22 AM
Very deep and meaningful.congratulations
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 6:03 AM
A delightful poem, Andrea, poignant and precise. I appreciate your comment on “Question Mark Eternal.” Howard
Proxenos Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 11:56 PM
HOW EROTICLY ROMANTICLY NATURALLY BEAUTIFUL. SPLENDID WRITE AND ABSOLUTELY BEST FOR A WIN. BLESSINGS AND HUGS, JENNIFER.
Callus Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Beautiful!! A fleeting moment saved for eternity. ~ Warm regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 2:58 AM
This one so shaped like it could fly from the page like the love of your former beau. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page/ Sara
Mcintosh Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Definitely a fave!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE this. You're a amazing writer. God bless you. Love, Gina
Skelly Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 5:45 AM
Whimsical and delightful.....
Seeker Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 8:31 PM
Delightful! Sure to place high
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Great haiku, meaningful and delightful. Best wishes with the contest.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 10:14 AM
Beautiful metaphors. All the best for contest
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Cute and pleasant. Hugs
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful, Andrea ~
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