Butterfly Kisses Into Bite Marks

You,
feral beauty
a tempest raging.
You are,
castles in the sky
crashing over oceans of me.
You are loved,
worshiped by everything that I am
wilder than the beasts raging within me.

Always busy with nobody
while I turned to ashes.
"What's the use of a pretty face
if it's rotting in the ground," they'd say.
So I knew death had come for me when
your ocean eyes turned into Tsunamis and
your butterfly kisses turned into bite marks.

As I realized
All you ever said to me
Was a lie
You left me
Hurt
In pain
Alone
Confused
As all your butterfly kisses turned into bite marks
And crimson red stained my skin like a tattoo
All my happy thoughts flew away
Like ash from a bonfire flying up into oblivious
And as you burned my skin, trailing your fingers along my throat
I knew this was the end of our days, together at least
You'll leave me in a broken mess on the floor to pick up my own shattered heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/24/2016 3:08:00 PM
Hi Fullmoon Sway, WOW... awesome free verse, this is the part I think flows awesomely... You left me Hurt In pain Alone Confused :) This is a deep write. A pleasure to read. SKAT
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Date: 1/24/2016 6:07:00 PM
thank you
Date: 1/24/2016 5:10:00 AM
Deceit + betrayal = hurt. Done very nicely. Love the title, too.
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Fullmoon Sway
Date: 1/24/2016 6:07:00 PM
thank you:)
Date: 1/24/2016 2:43:00 AM
i like it fm
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Fullmoon Sway
Date: 1/24/2016 6:07:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 1/24/2016 1:48:00 AM
Hurt beautifully explained. Thumbs up!
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Date: 1/24/2016 6:06:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 1/23/2016 11:22:00 PM
A beautifully expressed poem of betrayal and loss, Fullmoon. Great write!
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Date: 1/23/2016 11:23:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 1/23/2016 10:35:00 PM
how is this poem
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