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Butterfly Kisses

Butterfly Kisses

I am here strolling in the cool wood
as I take a seat drinking in nature
I espy some movement in the boxwood
going over to look I see a feeler

There to my delight by chance
is a cocoon starting to open
slowly bit by bit does emerge
a colourful butterfly all golden

It spreads it wings to dry
gently flaps them with grace
then it hoovers ready to fly
now it lands on my face

I can  see two what bliss
as I squint, it will depart
with a gentle kiss
It flys off taking my heart

contest: Butterfly Kisses written 06/14/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/16/2013 10:09:00 PM
This is so lovely shadow!!!! very tender beautiful words....definetly a winning poem:0)..really enjoyed your version!!! ty for sharing
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:34:00 AM
Cherie ty so much for your high praise very much appreciated ty for stopping in Shadow x
Date: 6/16/2013 8:11:00 AM
Sweet and sureal, Shadow! I like it! Jimbo
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Date: 6/16/2013 9:52:00 AM
hi Jimbo how kind of you ty Shadow x
Date: 6/15/2013 11:51:00 PM
Excellent. Lovely nature write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/16/2013 9:56:00 AM
hi Ravi glad you enjoyed ty for your time reading Shadow
Date: 6/15/2013 2:59:00 PM
wow, this is so endearing. You literallyl got a butterfly kiss. I really like this entry into the contest!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/15/2013 3:20:00 PM
hi Andrea very happy you like it Shadow x smile
Date: 6/15/2013 11:55:00 AM
lovely descriptive nature write : )
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:18:00 PM
Most kind of you Jack ty appreciate Shadow x
Date: 6/15/2013 6:27:00 AM
Beautiful. Such a lovely way to describe nature's glory. Thank you for your comments on my poem
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:17:00 PM
hi Monterey I love nature ty so much Shadow x
Date: 6/15/2013 4:25:00 AM
Impressive stuff,what a delight to wake up to this morning.
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:16:00 PM
dear sweet M.M ty my friend you have made my day brighter love Shadow xox
Date: 6/14/2013 9:47:00 PM
Amazing write! Talented!
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:13:00 PM
Elai really appreciate your comments ty so much Shadow x
Date: 6/14/2013 6:44:00 PM
Awwww this is lovely Linda, brilliant idea for the contest, beautifully written too. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:12:00 PM
Richard tyvm appreciate greatly Shadow x
Date: 6/14/2013 6:27:00 PM
I use to raise Monarch Butterflies. I can relate to the awe-inspiring butterfly emergence. An excellent poem for the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/15/2013 3:10:00 PM
hi Connie and ty butterflies are so beautiful. Very happy you like it Shadow x

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