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Butterfly Kisses

With colorful wings, Her lips pressed on a flower; Butterfly kisses.

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Date: 1/26/2009 3:52:00 PM

A beautiful title and an equally inviting and lovely Haiku. Peace always, John

Date: 1/18/2009 8:38:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku, perfectly captured, a snapshot in time. Regards Déirdre Ó Maidín

Date: 1/15/2009 8:01:00 PM

Lovely haiku! I wait for spring and this gave me a moment in it. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Love, Robin

Date: 1/15/2009 4:56:00 PM

Interesting use of this short form. Oh those butterfly kisses have me smiling. Keep on writing! Karen

Date: 1/15/2009 1:32:00 PM

The way a butterfly kisses the flower is sweet. Good job, nice haiku..Elizabeth

Date: 1/14/2009 4:52:00 PM

Great haiku, the beauty of a butterfly is nice to see in the spring and summer. DN

Date: 1/13/2009 9:51:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol

Date: 1/12/2009 3:40:00 PM

Nice haiku, welcome to poetry soup.

Date: 1/11/2009 7:12:00 PM

Danielle, great imagery you captured here. I like the title and the way it describes a butterfly's day...Raul