Butterfly Kisses

With colorful wings,
Her lips pressed on a flower;
Butterfly kisses.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Heck Avatar
January 26, 2009 at 3:52 PM
A beautiful title and an equally inviting and lovely Haiku. Peace always, John
Omaidin Avatar
January 18, 2009 at 8:38 AM
This is a beautiful haiku, perfectly captured, a snapshot in time. Regards Déirdre Ó Maidín
Gass Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 8:01 PM
Lovely haiku! I wait for spring and this gave me a moment in it. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Love, Robin
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January 15, 2009 at 4:56 PM
Interesting use of this short form. Oh those butterfly kisses have me smiling. Keep on writing! Karen
Neal Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 1:32 PM
The way a butterfly kisses the flower is sweet. Good job, nice haiku..Elizabeth
Neal Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Great haiku, the beauty of a butterfly is nice to see in the spring and summer. DN
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol
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January 12, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Nice haiku, welcome to poetry soup.
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January 11, 2009 at 7:12 PM
Danielle, great imagery you captured here. I like the title and the way it describes a butterfly's day...Raul
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