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Butterfly Haven

a mimosa tree
   spreads its sweet fragrance aloft
       butterfly haven




8/20/19
5 7 5  syllables counted on PS
Tree Haiku Contest
Tania Kitchin

butterflysensestreehaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

March 30, 2021 at 3:32 AM

I can see we are both crazy about butterflies!

Kim Rodrigues

August 30, 2019 at 4:32 PM

I can tell you are gaga for butterflies!

Phyllis Babcock

August 26, 2019 at 12:05 PM

Not familiar with that tree but must have a nice smell to attract butterflies. See you won with this haiku. Congrats to you. love phyl

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:31 PM

Thank you, Phyllis!

Panagiota Romios

August 25, 2019 at 7:29 PM

Heartfelt Congrats, Kim Panagiota

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:30 PM

Thank you, Panagiota!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

August 23, 2019 at 7:17 AM

Congratulations, Kim on your fine win. Beautiful Haiku.

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:30 PM

Thank you, Subimal!

Eve Roper

August 22, 2019 at 11:38 PM

Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:29 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Susan Ashley

August 22, 2019 at 9:22 PM

A vivid and lovely haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:29 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Tom Cunningham

August 22, 2019 at 8:41 PM

Beautiful image Kim, congrats on your top win. Tom

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:29 PM

Thank you, Tom!

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2019 at 6:12 PM

very nicely done. I'd love to see one! Congrats.

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:28 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Edward Ibeh

August 22, 2019 at 3:23 PM

Beautiful haiku, Kim:-) Congrats on your well-deserved win!

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:28 PM

Thank you, Edward!

Line Gauthier

August 22, 2019 at 2:19 PM

Bravo. Lovely imagery. Congrats on your top win, Kim.

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:28 PM

Thank you, Line!

Jan Allison

August 22, 2019 at 11:57 AM

Gorgeous imagery Kim, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:27 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Kim Rodrigues

August 22, 2019 at 8:57 AM

Oh yes! Congratulations, Kim

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:27 PM

Thank you, Kim!

John Gondolf

August 22, 2019 at 8:11 AM

A beautiful image, Kim, congrats on your win. John

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:26 PM

Thank you, John!

Kurt Ravidas

August 22, 2019 at 7:33 AM

Lovely fragrance. Congrats, Kim.

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:26 PM

Thank you, Kurt!

Jeanne Mcgee

August 22, 2019 at 7:12 AM

A wonderful image. Congrats on your winning placement, Kim

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:23 PM

Thank you, Jeanne!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 22, 2019 at 6:16 AM

- Congratulations ... no surprise to see this in the first place, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:23 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2019 at 5:05 AM

Kim, congratulations on your first place win with your gorgeous haiku!

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:21 PM

Thank you, Tania, for my placement! A very pleasant surprise!

Sandra Adams

August 21, 2019 at 8:53 PM

what a beautiful image... nothing is as graceful as a butterfly in my opinion... nice haiku... hugs :)

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:20 PM

Thank you, Sandy!

Kim Rodrigues

August 21, 2019 at 2:34 PM

Love that imagery!

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:18 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Gershon Wolf

August 21, 2019 at 11:17 AM

Sweet!! Great entry for the contest, Kim. Best wishes, gw

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:17 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Joseph Spence Sr

August 21, 2019 at 9:38 AM

Excellent haiku poem. I have always loved the essence and brevity of the form. Great job. Blessings always!

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:16 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 20, 2019 at 2:21 PM

- A beautiful haiku, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

August 29, 2019 at 2:15 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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