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Butterfly Effect

Butterfly effect;
			Your wings create thunderstorms,
			Transformation rains
			Onto my Lazarus heart
			To be reborn once again.

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Felicia Jarvis

March 1, 2017 at 4:47 AM

I am amazed. The short poem can convey such a strong message, wounderful!

Deborah Burch

February 13, 2017 at 2:39 PM

Lovely Phil!! Well done and congratulations!!! Hugggs deb

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

January 26, 2017 at 6:12 AM

I like your use of Lazaus here..... mmmmn! i just love butterflies..:) I see a trophy, Congratulations! smiles, Olive ELoisa :)

Phil Capitano

January 26, 2017 at 8:35 AM

I love butterflies too and have used that image in many of my poems. Perhaps you will like "How High the Walls We Build". Thanks. :)

Donna Roberts

January 17, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Congratulations Lovely....this was my entry to concrete crush https://Society6.com/motherof2g2b

Mark Martin

January 13, 2017 at 11:52 AM

Like the Lazarus reference! Congrats Phil! :-)

Phil Capitano

January 13, 2017 at 1:04 PM

Thanks for checking us out. Namaste.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 11, 2017 at 2:51 AM

Phil, Wow! That is a well deserved win. Congratulations. :) Dane Ann

Phil Capitano

January 11, 2017 at 7:45 AM

A last minute entry. Thanks.

Afzal Nusker

January 11, 2017 at 2:41 AM

Congrats on your trophy win with this fine, fluttering poem.

Phil Capitano

January 11, 2017 at 7:44 AM

Thanks ;)

Sandra Haight

January 10, 2017 at 7:16 PM

Lovely, Phil. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Sandra

Phil Capitano

January 10, 2017 at 8:45 PM

Thanks Sandra I'm thrilled.

Agnes Krampe

January 10, 2017 at 6:34 PM

Beautiful, Phil. Congrats on your top win. Agnes

Phil Capitano

January 10, 2017 at 8:45 PM

Thanks Agnes for commenting.

Joseph May

January 10, 2017 at 5:20 PM

Congrats on your win Phil

Phil Capitano

January 10, 2017 at 8:43 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

January 6, 2017 at 8:17 AM

Really good tanka, Phil. Love the butterfly metaphor, that always work for me. Strong imagery, nicely written poem. I tried to the find poem "Tags" in your catalog, but I couldn't find it. Maybe you can help direct me on how to find it so I can read it. Love the poem. Peace and love to you.