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Butterfly Dreams

I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming Real-time and genuine, or just me mis-believing? A fascinating fabricated scene of night-time bliss The only realm of thought where I don't feel out of place Captivating,cosmic and recurring once again As crystal clear as raindrops racing for the window pane Entrancing yet enchanting, subconsciously sublime Random, unrecalling, yet every one divine Enrapturing,consuming every moment of my slumber Delicate, delightful, like the calm after the thunder I'm drowning, in a peaceful way, I've never been so deep My dreams don't seem to realise that I'm not yet asleep 11 July 2011

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Date: 7/18/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations Jodie on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:17:00 PM
Beautiful,Jodie. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on another great big win in daydreaming contest with this first class poetry luv..beautiful...
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:58:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Jodie
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Jodie. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:17:00 AM
wow! I have a deep poem that can go with this... but, wow! this is an awesome entry... I like the way you plotted on who was dreaming of who????? I think you being the butterfly added extra deep to your poem... truly enjoyed,..p.d.
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