Jodie Williams Poet Rhyme

Butterfly Dreams

I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming 
Real-time and genuine, or just me mis-believing?
A fascinating fabricated scene of night-time bliss
The only realm of thought where I don't feel out of place

Captivating,cosmic and recurring once again
As crystal clear as raindrops racing for the window pane
Entrancing yet enchanting, subconsciously sublime
Random, unrecalling, yet every one divine

Enrapturing,consuming every moment of my slumber
Delicate, delightful, like the calm after the thunder
I'm drowning, in a peaceful way, I've never been so deep
My dreams don't seem to realise that I'm not yet asleep


11 July 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2011 at 7:49 AM Congratulations Jodie on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol

Elaine George July 15, 2011 at 8:17 PM Beautiful,Jodie. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 15, 2011 at 6:22 PM Congrats Jodie on another great big win in daydreaming contest with this first class poetry luv..beautiful...

Dr.Ram Mehta July 15, 2011 at 5:58 PM My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Jodie

Carol Sunshine Brown July 11, 2011 at 9:43 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Jodie. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A July 11, 2011 at 6:17 AM wow! I have a deep poem that can go with this... but, wow! this is an awesome entry... I like the way you plotted on who was dreaming of who????? I think you being the butterfly added extra deep to your poem... truly enjoyed,..p.d.